Monday, March 25, 2013

I Just Saw a Haiku

I just saw a haiku fly by: seven(-ish) crane-like birds (egrets?), low and fast overhead, bright-lit from underneath, backed by a near-black sky. I'm sure the right poet could do something solid with that. If I wasn't sleepy and muddle-headed, I'd make my own frail attempt.

6 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:07 AM

    Seven cranes
    Low, overhead
    Backed be near-black sky

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  2. Anonymous11:47 AM

    White cranes fly overhead
    fast and Low
    Near-black sky

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  3. Anonymous11:53 AM

    Cranes flying flying
    Fast, low
    Black sky beyond

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  4. Anonymous12:30 PM

    Muddled poet
    Drinks black coffee
    Hopes for haiku

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  5. Anonymous12:34 PM

    sleepy poet
    spills coffee
    cross white page

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    1. Y'all are great! Inspired my little attempt...

      The muddled writer —
      Seven night-lit cranes above —
      Hopes for a poem.

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